A Part of Me
Published by GHC • Apr 19th, 2012 • Category: Poetryby Avy, age 11
Click, click, click?
Gallop, gallop, gallop?
Stomping on the flowers
Beating all those cowards
My mighty, trusty horse
Right at my side
Everywhere I go
She glides just like an angel
As we run along the fields
And the dreams come
Just punching through my veins
It feels like it’s a part of me
But now all we have is to
Sleep, and…
DREAM.



Amazing!!!!
SO GREAT !
This is really good!!! I am not really good at making story’s but you have a gift!! I love this. Good job
thank’ss.
ohh my pickle soooo amazing
Nice!
You might need to make a little more FEELING to it.
Make it feel like you really LOVE horses.