Can You Hear It?
Published by GHC • Sep 30th, 2009 • Category: Poetryby HorseFeathers, age 16
Thump… thump thump
Can you hear it?
Thump… thump thump
It is my heart
and it is about to burst
All my life I have trained for this day
As a colt I was young and rebellious
Now… now I know what I am for
What I am made of
From the earth I was created
and to the earth I shall return
but for now… I am a storm
The rider upon my back is calm
for he knows me and I know him
All else is silent except the harmony of
our hearts…
Thump.. Thump Thump
Thump, thump, thump
When the bell sounds…
we are but an illusion.
What a great poem. Awsome job!
Dedicated to all the race horses before us, with us, and to come.
WOW!
wow…….
Awesome!
Aw thats awesome HF! I love the poem!!! One question though on info it saids its located in the blog. Are all poems located in the blog???
Awesome =] it made me think about what u meant
Amazing!! Your poem is a perfect description of a rider and a horse becoming one. You are truly a talented poet [don't ever forget that!] ;]
very nice. As a horse racing geek, I can picture this real well. It brightened my VERY DREARY day. Thanks!
Thanks mates! Joannah- this is located in the poetry secton.. all poetry and fictional stories have a category to their own. =0)
~HF
hi awsome story really love it1!!!!
Lovely rhymes! I can feel the tune.
Love it!
Two thumbs up!