Changing
Published by GHC • Nov 27th, 2009 • Category: Poetryby Peanut, age 9
Like the four seasons, not everyone does know,
Why the summer sun turns to winter snow,
Everything around me is changing, all too quick!
And if it stays at this pace, I will be sick.
But with him it’s the same,
No one to blame,
He doesn’t change, but waits for me,
I try to replicate him, but I will never be.
A lover, a fighter, but only for peace,
Knowing everything is free, can’t be bought or for lease,
To always be kind, and never do wrong,
So if you like this, listen to my song!
If everyone were to be like him, this world would be great,
And all would be perfect, and not ever any hate.
Everything around me is changing to quick,
And if it stays like this, I’m gonna be sick!
But with him it’s the same,
No one to blame.
He stays by my side and soaks up my tears,
And guides me to the light, and helps me through my fears,
A lover a fighter but only for peace,
Knowing everything is free, can’t be bought or for lease,
To always be kind, and never do wrong,
So if you wanna hear more, then listen to my song!
Horses will keep me happy all my life,
And when someone seems to cut my heart with a knife,
I know he will always love me and not hurt me,
And no one will live up like Gully to be.
Awesome ryhming skills! I love now how your broadening your scope of poems about Gully.. much more descriptive! Champion work
~HF
I love how desctiptive this poem was! And I like how its longer…..i enjoy poems that you can kick back and read, like long poems. Short poems, to me, are just too…..short! But we all have our opinions….great poem. Lovely work, Peanut. And you’re only NINE?!?! Wow. You are very talented, and you should be proud of yourself for your wonderful work. Keep writing!
Good job! Never tired of hearing about Gully! ;]
-m
Gully sounds alot like my moms old gelding, he was the best. Keep loving gully and keep writing :)
Wow, I loved it. I always love hearing about Gully.
Aw, this was really sweet. Gulliver sounds like a really neat horse-he’s lucky to have you!
-Raven
Wow, beautiful poem! I love the stanza- he stands by my side and soaks up my tears- It’s so sweet you can tell all your troubles to Gully- what a blessing he must be! :]
I love your poem. But I just realized how cold it is outside, haha! Of course, spending time with your favorite horse warms you right up! Good job!
thanks yall! :) You guys r so nice!