Feels Like a Dream
Published by GHC • Feb 7th, 2012 • Category: Poetry
by Avy, age 11
Riding through the fields
Laughing in the wind
Rushing through the woods
It feels like a dream
Training in the sun
Jumping at the start
Believe as it comes
This is not a dream
It may feel like one though
But may I
and the horse lead you through
Your dreams
And this time
They’re not make believe



Love it! So so so much! Wouldn’t change a thing!
Oh, beautiful! This poem has a wonderfully dreamy feel to it, (absolutely no pun intended), and it reminds me of the precious but few and far between times I’ve had amongst horses.
Thanks
i really liked the second verse
Wow! this is brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) !!!!!!!