Flood of Flame
Published by GHC • Nov 25th, 2009 • Category: Fictionby Pal’s Pal, age 11
As I stood in the middle of the pasture, I was sure of only one thing. That thing was my horse. The rain hit my face in a melancholy way. I felt the dreams I had once dreamt running free in my head again. I cried.
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I saw my girl. She was standing in her valiant way, her mane blown by the wind. Something was wrong with her. I trotted over to see if she was OK. The rain pounded on me. I nickered to her. Her face was wet with salt water. I asked her to come with me out of the rain. She did. She seemed sad. Very sad. But why?
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Flame had seen me crying. He seemed concerned. He asked me to follow him. I did. I slipped in the mud. Flame nudged me up. I sat in his small shed and cried. I couldn’t see anymore. The tears were blinding. Why, oh why, had Miramba left? If she had been at our barn I knew none of the things would have happened. But sadly, Miramba had gone to France to compete in some shows. Why did everything have to happen to me?
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She seemed lost. Without guidance. Once we made it to the shed, she laid down and slept. I allowed her to. Before she laid down I heard her murmur, “All hope is lost.”
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I woke up in the hay in Flame’s shed. He was in the corner getting a drink. I stood up and looked outside. It was flooding! I stared in shock. The water was to my ankles and rising. I needed to make sure the other horses were OK. Flame had the highest pasture, and about ten horses could comfortably fit in it. Then I thought of Cendal. She was due to foal any day. She was my first priority. She needed me most. I wouldn’t… no, couldn’t let her down.
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The rain was causing a flood. My girl grabbed our food and some for herself. Then she led some mares and foals and geldings into my pasture. I knew it was vital for their survival. I couldn’t let them — or my girl — down. No matter what, I would find a way to get along with all these horses in my pasture.
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Flame was being a good boy, letting the others in his pasture. He knew as well as I the lower pastures would be flooded. The rain was still falling steadily as I put the last of the horses from lower pastures in higher pastures. I went back to double check, or at least tried to. I was frozen with fear as I saw the waters of the Chick-I-Toweii river. I saw the waters, but nowhere near the banks. The river had officially flooded.
I still had to try to see if I had left any horses. “Why couldn’t Miramba be here?” I thought. I ran back to higher ground. As I made it up the hill I heard a horrid crashing noise. I turned to see the river had risen high enough to claim my lower barn. I was terrified. I screamed.
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I asked some of the older mares about the storm. They said it would pass. That was when I heard her scream. It wasn’t like when she found us in something bad. No. This was filled with terror and anguish. When I heard this scream I too was filled with fear. Why did she scream? Was she OK?
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I ran to Flame’s pasture. I was still shocked by the barn. I needed to rest. I settled down in the shed. Surely this flooding couldn’t go on forever. I was scared. I was alone. I wasn’t safe.
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I tried to soothe my girl. She was scared. Why? The flood would pass. We’d be OK. I knew that. Why couldn’t she know we would be OK?
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I was awakened by a horrid noise. What was it? Flame stood in the doorway. I stepped past him to see how high the waters had gotten. They’d only risen a few feet. I heard a piercing whinny. Who was that? Cendal — she was giving birth.
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My girl rushed out the gate. She was going so fast she forgot to close the gate. I stood blocking the others from exiting. I knew if they escaped it could mean death for them. That was not an option. I bared my teeth at a two year-old who tried to push me out of the way. The older mares saw what I was doing and came over to help. No one else tried to pass. We held the others back until my girl arrived. She was carrying something. What? It smelled like a horse. It looked like a foal. It was a foal?! My girl’s face was wet again. I don’t think it was rain water. Cendal. She had passed while in labor. One of the old mares went to look for someone who would take care of the little foal.
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I got back to the pasture to find I’d forgotten to shut the gate. Flame and some mares had kept the other horses in while I helped Cendal’s foal. I looked over to the rising flood waters. I looked at the foal. Her name would be Rain. As I stepped into the pasture I was greeted by a mare and her foal. She seemed to want Rain. I set her down and the mare took her as her own. The rain lightened. I smiled. Rain certainly was a lucky foal. I went to lay down again. All my worries were forgotten.
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My girl was happy! She smiled! I’m happy she’s back to herself. The rain has stopped! Our way of life shall soon return. Sadly, Cendal shan’t. I miss her, but her foal… she seems almost magic. I wonder what she will do when she grows up. She’s truly gorgeous. I guess I’ll see.
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Author’s Notes: This story was written from Flame’s and Kristy’s (his girl) point of view. I do plan on making more stories about this bunch.
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Awww! Very touching, sad story. Its also very thrilling at the same time…very good, Pal’s Pal. I love it. And I hope you do keep writing about Flame and Kristy’s bunch.
–Wild’n'Free–
I love how it was short but meaningful! I love books compiled of many short tales, an anthology to be exact. Champion story line
~HF
That was soooo good! A very orignal idea how you did Flame AND Kristy’s point of views!
I absolutely love things like this. Horse-girl point of view. And you nailed it beautifully. Great job!!!
-m
Oh wow! It takes a lot of bravery to take one two points of view in a story, since its hard to make everything connect and flow. You did a great job! And its beautifully written, also! Good job!
Aawww, that was cute! Very poignant and touching. I liked how it went back and forth, and also the length. Not very long, but long enough. Great story! Keep it up!
i had a touch of writers block when i wrote it, so it turned out nice for that, rereading it i was like “wow” Thanks guys! :) and i see alot of writing in my future cause’ i just got back from a bareback trail ride and most likly wont be able to walk tomarrow! :D Gotta love it! Thanks again guys!!!
Yay! I am soo happy the story had a happy ending! It seemed so sad at the beggining and it was a truly magnificent story!
I don’t know why, but to me, this is the saddest story on GHC. It’s sweet how much Flame cares for his girl, and the storyline was beautiful. I hope you write a lot more, Pal’s Pal – this is one of my favorites!
Amazing story! I was totally compelled. I hope you write more! This one is absolutley stunning. Good story line. My L.A. teacher would love you!!!!!! This has to be one of my favorites! Keep on doing what you do Pal’s Pal! ;)