For Always and Ever
Published by GHC • Oct 25th, 2009 • Category: Poetryby Peanut, age 9
For always and ever I’ll stay be his side and never leave,
And we will never part, during hardships and peeves!
He may be old but he’s sparky and cool. I love him he is great,
And he, just like me, will never give in, and he’ll never finish late.
For always and ever I’ll love him oh so,
And he brightens up the days that are sad and low!
He is so cute and that’s no lie,
Leaving him? I’d rather die!
For always and ever I’ll love him forever,
And leaving him, for me, is never!
The love which is shared between him and me is good,
And only a dreamer could think this, and only making it true is what I would!
For always and ever he is my babe,
And him I will always save!
I love him so I will make my point now,
So our bond will always be unbreakable, so let us take a bow!
Awwww…. sweet poem Peanut. Are you talking about Gulliver in this?
other than the old part it is SOOO me and Pal. AMAZING, i LOVE it! ;) it was awesome
There it is! :-) I love it Peanut! It is ama-za-zing! Absouletly awesome. I personally adore rhyming my poems and you do it so well! Your love for your horse is obviously there and can not be missed.
I love the line “he is so cute and thats’s no lie Leaving him? I’d rather die” Its such an adorable poem and shows the love for your horse.
that was cute… i notice you care a great deal about Gully in your poems. Maybe if you create any more poems about him you could write about someting he did, like a funny habit or something he did at an event. great job
~HF
Good job Peanut
Adorable poem Peanut! I hope you write many more, you are a wonderful poet, and Gully must love you…I can just imagine your sweet horse!
Another wonderful poem from you, Peanut. From each submission I can always see that magical bond betwen you and Gully. Maybe some day you’ll assemble all of these poems and publish them. I’d definitely be your customer ;)
great job Peanut!
If you do what Made said, Peanut, I’d buy fifty copies.
I miss Titian, and this reminded me of him. I haven’t felt this empty since Halo, my other horse, died. It’s a horrible feeling, feeling as if something is missing from you. All my tears are gone, my heart aches, and I feel as if I’ve been split in half. But nice poem, I like it. Great job, you always show your talent, Peanut! Write on!
–Wild’n'Free–
I loved it! That was champion work!