Hold On
Published by GHC • Jun 30th, 2009 • Category: Poetry, by Peanutby Peanut, age 9
Those soulful black eyes stare at me
Black like coal, deep as the sea
I’ll hold on forever and never let go
Oh Gully I love you, I love you so
Your short little tail and whiskered chin
You’ve done no wrong, done no sin
I’ll never forget for as long as I live
The gift that you give me, that only you can give!
Lovely! Short and snappy as well as ryhming! Who is this Gully?
You are defiantly dedicated to Gully Peanut! That horse couldn’t have a better owner! ;0)
~HF
Great poem! I loved it!
Gulliver is my old horse!
I’m assuming that it is the same horse mentioned in the poem Gulliver, Oh.
Ah, beautiful. I’m sure Gulliver writes poems about you, too!
That would be a crazy thought!
That’s a sweet and amazing poem, Peanut! Every time after reading your poems I’m able to connect with your bond with Gulliver. Beautiful work once again, it’s amazing what love can add to writing.
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How long did it take you to write this poem? Is Gulliver your favorite horse?
great poem!peanut,thats just like the other poem u made!