I Am a Mustang!
Published by GHC • Mar 13th, 2009 • Category: Poetry, by Violet Inkpenby Violet Inkpen, age 12
Grace and beauty, fierce and proud, strong and wise, big and loud.
When the wind calls my name I dash away; running, galloping, all day.
It is my duty to guard my herd and find them a place to sleep; I guard the foals with all my strength for they are mine to keep.
The hills where I roam belong to me
I guard and defend them with my life
My mares know it’s our territory
Through all pleasure and strife
I’m called a mustang by those who know
Just how fast I can go
A spirit of the wind a shadow in the night
And If another will challenge then for my mares I fight.
One with the wind, one with the sun
I am a stallion and a leader until my life is done.
I AM A MUSTANG!
Champion detail Vi! I can feel the power and signifigance of lead Stallion. Good job
~HF
Vi your work is compeletely JB material! Cant wait tell ur a JB. Loved the poem
Violet Inkpen,
Your work is spectacular. Awesome Job!
It’s not hard to tell you love Mustangs! It really comes through in your work!
Good job
This poem definitely captures both the beauty and fierceness of a wild Mustang! I love it!
My gosh.. You are really good at poetry Violet Inkpen! I mean it.. you should be a poet when you grow up!
mustangmane
wow *blushing* I didn’t think you all would feel so strongly about a few ryming words jumbled together in a few seconds……I’m touched that you all like it so much!
Great Poem! LeadMare, could I submit a poem that I submitted to GHC before the site went down? I submitted like just a little bit before the site went down, and I was wondering if I could submit it again since it’s not here anymore? Violet Inkpen, I always love the way you tell things.