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Indescribable | by Monica, age 13

Published by GHC • Apr 20th, 2007 • Category: Competitions and Giveaways, Guest Bloggers

Horses aren’t just creatures
They aren’t just what we ride
They have way more features
Than I can even describe
As dainty as a foal
As fierce as a stallion’s cry
They have the heart
To gallop to the sky

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Author’s Note: To all horses that have lived and died, and to those who still live today — I don’t know how to say this, but you have given something indescribable to humans worldwide.

Editor’s Note: This poem is an entry for the poetry contest sponsored by HorseBloggers.com.

GOOD LUCK MONICA!

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  1. Madelaina on April 21st, 2007

    This poem is very beautiful. Good Luck!

  2. IluvnmissmybabyBensonsomuch! on April 21st, 2007

    A great poem. I write short stories to show my English teacher and in year 7, I wrote a poem that got published in the book ‘I Have A Dream’. If poems are well written (like yours) they can reach out to the world and touch hearts, strum a chord and open our eyes to what we see.

  3. ponyprincess on April 22nd, 2007

    Very beautiful, it describes the Indescribable! Good Luck!

  4. Monica on April 25th, 2007

    thanks :)

  5. Julia on April 25th, 2007

    Great poem! It has great rhythm and meaning, Good luck.

  6. sam on April 26th, 2007

    hey that is a really great poem and it has a lot of truth. keep up writing the poems this one was awesome!

  7. lovemyhorses on April 28th, 2007

    That is a beautiful poem. it really touches your heart.

  8. Marisa on May 1st, 2007

    It’s beautiful!