Loyal
Published by GHC • Jul 20th, 2009 • Category: Poetryby Violet Inkpen, age 13
Your eyes hold love
though your spirit roams free
You are wild as the ocean
Though you always love me
I cannot understand how when you can choose to be free
With love and sacrifice you come to me
Or how you always show loyalty
To a human, a person, mainly me
A mustang at heart and spirit and soul
A friend and companion
The best I’ll ever know
Two worlds are held dear in your heart
Yet loyal you are to me from the start
With love as deep as the river is long
With loyalty in times of fear
A guardian and hero is your song
And I will always hold you dear
Your eyes hold love
Your spirit will roam
But to me you will come
When I call you home.
Thank you my friend, my horse, my hero. Thank you for your love.
It’s amazing how much horses give up to please us and to love us, and this poem depicts that concept flawlessly, just like the rest of your work. Fantastic writing, I could feel all the power yet willingness of your horse and the love in the words.
Champion poem! I love how you show the loaylty and trust between horse and owner.
~HF
Great! Undiscribable! I love the way you show the love between horse and owner.
Thanks guys. I love horses so much and I realize they must love us to be that willing to let us ride them.
Beautiful peom! I love that the horse is free and loyal at the same time.
It shows the special bond that you can only find between horse and human = ] fantastic
This poem is so good. you are extremely talented. Keep writing, PLEASE!!
Beautiful peom! I love your poems. =)The love between a horse and its owner is very special.