Lucky
Published by GHC • Oct 13th, 2009 • Category: Poetryby Stargazer, age 13
As the bright sun shines down on me
From my chest escapes a sigh
For is it possible at this moment
Another girl as lucky as I?
Between us true connection
His hooves maintain a steady beat
I will always love the sound of this
No matter what challenges I may meet
The light shines from the heavens
And shares with me its bliss
For nowhere in this world
Can you find a better feeling than this
Wow,wow,wow! The simplest poem can be amazing! The last line was my favorite! You are really an accomplished poem writer! I simply love your work! I hope beyond hope that we’ll be seeing more of your work soon! Keep writing poems; you are really really good at it! I can’t wait for your next submission!
Violet Inkpen
Simply amazing.. actualy its not simple at all. A feeling can render so many different spectrums in the individual. Champion poem Stargazer i fell in love with this one. =0)
~HF
Just what Violet Inkpen said. Simple sweet and awesome! Love it and you’re great and poetry! And what HF said too! It IS simple but its got a LOT more in it.
Wow. Total love. I am in awe of your poetry skills. I cannot write poems. But if there are more people with talent like you, then I won’t need to write poems! Amazing! Loved that.
YOu are right HF, it isn’t simple. It is pure creativity!
VI
Beautiful!! You captured the heart of a horse-crazy girl in this poem alone! Isn’t it funny how small poems can have soo much meaning! :] Wonderful job!
whoa…i am speeach lesss
I can’t believe how much emotion and feeling you can put into this short poem. My favorite by far.
–Wild’n'Free–
I was sighing in contentment as I read this. Being around horses is just a magical feeling, there’s none other in the world that can match it. You’re a genius, Stargazer. To be able to capture that sense of bliss in so few words shows that you’re a very skilled writer. I hope to see more soon!
I agree :) Its an amazing poem, truely amazing! Breath taking, I may say. Keep up the great work!
so awesome!!! who knew something so simple could be so amazing?!
Awesome work Stargazer!
I loved it! The last line was my favorite. You’re right, there is nothing better than riding.