Running Free
Published by GHC • Mar 13th, 2010 • Category: March for Wild Horses, Poetry
by Palamia, age 11
I started my life running free
With no barriers or restriction
Struggling to gain my feet
And find my first meal
Running free with my herd
Until I was captured
And made to be tame
I carried my load
Until I was freed
And ran wild again
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Image Source: BLM Photo Library
That was really good!!!! I liked it alot!!!!
I like the way you wrote in just a few lines the way the Mustangs can go back and forth. Nice job!
That was really really good!! the poem was clear and short, very sweet! I love it!! keep it up!!
Short and sweet, as they always say! lol loved it!
Sweet poem, I like the picture too.
Great poem of a mustang’s life! I love how you can see a mustang grow as time went on in so few lines. Well done!
Very nice poem & picture. Very short and to the point, I like it.