Comments on: Secrets http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/ Wed, 08 Feb 2012 11:56:57 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Rochlia http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/#comment-14412 Rochlia Sat, 31 Oct 2009 21:31:50 +0000 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/?p=8439#comment-14412 Wow- amazing story! I loved the ending- someone should put it in a movie! :] Wow- amazing story! I loved the ending- someone should put it in a movie! :]

]]> By: LeadMare http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/#comment-14401 LeadMare Sat, 31 Oct 2009 13:40:06 +0000 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/?p=8439#comment-14401 Stargazer, I'm not clear what you're asking, but if you mean can you submit an enhanced version of the same story the answer is yes. HorseFeathers did that a while back -- she submitted <a href="http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/the-loch-herd/2009/04/11/" rel="nofollow"><em>The Loch Herd</em></a> then did an enhanced version for the competition, <a href="http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/the-loch-herd-the-first-tale/2009/09/25/" rel="nofollow"><em>The Loch Herd: The First Tale.</em></a> Stargazer, I’m not clear what you’re asking, but if you mean can you submit an enhanced version of the same story the answer is yes. HorseFeathers did that a while back — she submitted The Loch Herd then did an enhanced version for the competition, The Loch Herd: The First Tale.

]]> By: Stargazer http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/#comment-14369 Stargazer Sat, 31 Oct 2009 04:04:31 +0000 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/?p=8439#comment-14369 Thanks you guys. Leadmare, I know this is a weird question, but would it be okay if I added onto this some more? I know its my piece, but since I submitted it into the fiction contest I want to make sure people don't suspect plagiarism. That wouldn't be good. Thanks you guys. Leadmare, I know this is a weird question, but would it be okay if I added onto this some more? I know its my piece, but since I submitted it into the fiction contest I want to make sure people don’t suspect plagiarism. That wouldn’t be good.

]]> By: Wild'n'Free http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/#comment-14368 Wild'n'Free Sat, 31 Oct 2009 01:14:59 +0000 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/?p=8439#comment-14368 That was such a good story!!! I love your work, Stargazer!!! Keep writing, and I'm really looking forward to more! I was on the edge of my seat, and I love that feeling when you don't know what's going to happen, and then the unexpected happens. :P Anyways, great story! LOVVVVEEEEEE IIIIITTTTT!! --Wild'n'Free-- That was such a good story!!! I love your work, Stargazer!!! Keep writing, and I’m really looking forward to more! I was on the edge of my seat, and I love that feeling when you don’t know what’s going to happen, and then the unexpected happens. :P Anyways, great story! LOVVVVEEEEEE IIIIITTTTT!!

–Wild’n'Free–

]]> By: Stargazer http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/#comment-14367 Stargazer Fri, 30 Oct 2009 23:50:14 +0000 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/?p=8439#comment-14367 YES thanks for the critique!:) I love suggestions. It wasn't my best work and a could have done more to elaborate...and I'll definitely think about adding more. YES thanks for the critique!:) I love suggestions. It wasn’t my best work and a could have done more to elaborate…and I’ll definitely think about adding more.

]]> By: Pal's Pal http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/#comment-14366 Pal's Pal Fri, 30 Oct 2009 23:42:25 +0000 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/?p=8439#comment-14366 love it! :) i agree with HF entirely love it! :) i agree with HF entirely

]]> By: husky+horsegirl3 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/#comment-14362 husky+horsegirl3 Fri, 30 Oct 2009 22:35:04 +0000 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/?p=8439#comment-14362 Champion! :) Champion! :)

]]> By: mustang23 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/#comment-14355 mustang23 Fri, 30 Oct 2009 16:51:41 +0000 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/?p=8439#comment-14355 Wow. I thought I was good at suspense! You had me at the edge of my seat from almost the first paragraph, and you kept me there till the very end. Love the first person point of view, and suspense! This is a great story. Maybe you could use more description? But I truly loved it. It wasn't too long, which is good, since a suspense story shouldn't be very long. Great job, and keep it up! Wow. I thought I was good at suspense! You had me at the edge of my seat from almost the first paragraph, and you kept me there till the very end. Love the first person point of view, and suspense! This is a great story. Maybe you could use more description? But I truly loved it. It wasn’t too long, which is good, since a suspense story shouldn’t be very long. Great job, and keep it up!

]]> By: HorseFeathers http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/secrets-2/2009/10/30/#comment-14350 HorseFeathers Fri, 30 Oct 2009 12:49:01 +0000 http://www.girlshorseclub.com/blog/?p=8439#comment-14350 Champion story. I loved the suspense and I was on the edge of my saddle at the climax. I wanted to know what would become of Emily and Secret. It would have been neat if you went into a deeper mystery.. maybe you could add on more sections. Where the men have friends who are out to seek revenge on Em for putting their comrads in jail or something. That would be neat. In general, i love stories with happy endings but somtimes i like them to end where the villian or evil character has the adavtage. It sets a real "what happens next?" mood. lol =0) ~HF Champion story. I loved the suspense and I was on the edge of my saddle at the climax. I wanted to know what would become of Emily and Secret. It would have been neat if you went into a deeper mystery.. maybe you could add on more sections. Where the men have friends who are out to seek revenge on Em for putting their comrads in jail or something. That would be neat.

In general, i love stories with happy endings but somtimes i like them to end where the villian or evil character has the adavtage. It sets a real “what happens next?” mood. lol =0)

~HF

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