The Spark That Started the Fire
Published by GHC • Nov 15th, 2009 • Category: Fictionby Violet Inkpen, age 13
My eyes filled with wonder and awe as I stared at the thing before me. Mommy was cooing to me, as always. Daddy was video taping it all. I ignored them.
Slowly I looked the huge animal over, top to bottom, then I reached out a chubby hand and touched the softest nose in the world. The creature blinked gently, breathed in my smell, then gently licked my tiny hand with a massive tongue. I giggled softly, then reached closer and grabbed a fist full of the long mane. It wasn’t as soft as my mommy’s. In fact, it was hard and tough. I didn’t care.
Mommy moved closer. “You like the horsie?” she cooed, bouncing me on her hip. My eyes glanced at her then I looked back at the horsie and laughed; my eyes shone. Reaching out for the horsie again, I stroked the face with a clumbsy swipe. The horsie didn’t care. It gently nuzzled me as if I was an angel.
Five minutes later, with daddy’s large hands around my waist holding me onto the horsie’s car seat, I smiled to the world. Mommy led the horsie around and around the large place with white fences. Raising my arms up in the air I looked down at the horsie and knew that we had a bond.
“Lookie there Julie, our six month-old daughter already has talent for horses!” Daddy smiled at Mommy’s back. Mommy turned around and looked at me, a smile on her face.
“She’s our girl after all,” she sighed happily. I giggled again, and after a few hours of riding I fell fast asleep on the horsie.
That was my first memory. Smiling at the picture of me on a horse, I put it away and walked to the barn, bundling up against the cold rain.
“Hey Giddy Up, how are you?” I asked my beautiful thoroughbred stallion. Tomorrow he’d be in the second race of his life. I turned my attention to the stall across the hall where Giddy For Glory, Giddy Up’s mom, was gently sleeping.
Smiling, I thanked my parents for their introduction to horses. I loved thoroughbreds as much as I loved living. Without horses I’d rather not live. The thrill of racing, winning, seeing a horse you’ve bred and trained running across the finish line — it was all so wonderful. But just the joy of owning a horse in general was exciting. Yes, my parents got me horse-crazy at an early age, and growing up on their dude ranch helped. But even if they hated horses, I’m sure I would have still loved them madly.
Sighing, I left the barn and looked into the sky. Some things were meant to be, and I knew that horses were right for me.


Aw, such a cute story! I love it. So sweet. I adore your names in the story. Giddy Up and Giddy For Glory. Those are cute. Great job. It was such a cute story! :-D
Such a touching story! I love how its so descriptive and the story’ll just lift you up and carry you away….before you know it, you’re reading the last sentence. I adore your writing, VI!
–Wild’n'Free–
it sooo cute! i like how she called the saddle a car seat. very nice ;)
Champion story…I remember my first glance at this wonderful tall beast that looked as big as life itself to me at the time. Spot on
~HF
Was that a true story? Even if it wasn’t, it was really, really good!
-Raven
I WISH it was truley my story in real life! But my parent’s don’t own a dude ranch or love horses as I do and I doubt I’l ever own racing thoroughbreds, but thanks for liking the story guys.
Lovely I wish I had a wonderful horse start like that.
I love it!! A cute description of both horse and child- your stories are wonderful VI!
Amazing!~LD