There’s Something About Them
Published by GHC • Aug 19th, 2009 • Category: Poetry, by Rebecca Shylyby Rebecca Shyly, age 13
Horses
There’s just something about them
They have something special
That not many see
Horses
There’s so much to them
They have something incredible
That others want to be
Horses
So many girls love them
For so many reasons
And one of those girls
Is me
that is a short and sweet yet heartfelt poem shyly… i LOVE it. To the point =0)
~HF
I love the format of the poem. x]
Yay!!!!! I luv it! And I’m glad you’re back, Rebecca!!!!!
Thanks HorseFeathers. I wanted to write something longer, but when these words were there, it just felt right, so i left it at that.
love it! rebecca,i think its their inspirational look and they beauty and love theres something magical about them 2 i noticed.
That’s so sweet and I am sure that many girls will know the feeling
~Southern Belle
Horsecrazzz…beautiful writing! You’ve just proved with excellent style that simplistic poems can say just as much as longer ones. I like how nothing specific about horses are listed, it lets me imagine how they are special and incredible and that magic about them. When the words feel “right”, as you have said, then you can write the best poems, no matter how short they can be. Keep it up, I’m anticipating your next submissions!
Awesome Rebecca Shyly!
Thanks guys. All this praise really makes me glad to be writing again. I’ll try an keep it up for u guys. =]
That’s just like me!
It is short, sweet, to the point. At times a long poem is good but it is refreshing to read a short and powerful message with such love.
Wow, great job! I love it. It’s so sweet, and heart felt. Your such a great writer!
It’s nice, and to the point also..Good job ;)
i love that peom its short and sweeet and amazing i can really realate to it