Two Muddy Little Ponies
Published by GHC • Feb 27th, 2009 • Category: Poetry, by Gingerby Ginger, age 11
Two Muddy little ponies grazing in the grass
A chestnut and a paint
My little friend the paint
She will act like a saint
Until you try to catch her from the pasture
The chestnut is much older
Many little kids have hugged her shoulder
She’s much wiser
You dont have to lure her
She will walk right in her pen
While my little paint is as flighty as a wren
My little chestnut walks steadily
My little paint proudly prances, saying,”Look at me, look at me”
The little chestnut says, “Leave me be, just leave me be”
My pretty paint says, “Play with me, please play with me”
They are both so very different that you can see
But I love them both equally
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That is soo sweet. I can feel the little paints energy and enthusiasum. The description of the cheasnut relates a mature horse. Good job!
Cute!I love the ‘play with me,leave me be’ part the best its so like my two ponies!
Wow, that is so sweet
This is such a cool poem. It explains everything perfectly. The description of the beautiful horses in this poem are described wonderfully and I feel like I’m there. Good job, Ginger!!!
You do have a talent for poetry, Ginger. It was a very cute poem. Definitely lots of beautiful language.
Great job,
mustangmane
Nice poem. I am having trouble finding someone my age on GHC . I am 10