Where I Wander
Published by GHC • Jun 23rd, 2009 • Category: Poetry, by HorseFeathersby HorseFeathers, age 16
I am wandering along this trodden path
worn with many ages and friends alike
The past behind me the future before me
future generations of the past and past generations in the future.
I shake my dusty mane
the particles dance in between the shafts of the noon sunlight.
The forest calls my name and I answer her with my wanderings
We are whole yet separate in this vaporish life
Each changing and growing with the seasons as
time progresses.
My hooves are solid and firm from my many travelings
yet i do not deny they are beyond their time of rest.
Sometimes I just stand here on this trodden path, the path of life
and wonder “Will I see tomorrow, what will the future hold, will they remember the wanders of the past?”
I didn’t want this poem to end, it’s simply stunning! There really is no end nor measure for your talent, especially when it concerns poetry. This is one of those things in life that makes time stop and render people speechless. I’ve been studying poetry and language in English at school, this poem no doubt deserves to be in the booklet. Please, I beg you, write more soon :)
Thank you Madelania! You know many people have said that about my poems before. ;0) I like to leave readers with something to think about like you said… and let them finish it with their own thoughts. Thanks again
~HF
Amazing.
HorseFeathers: Your poems are exquisite. How do you come up with them? It would have taken me weeks.
That was truly amazing!
I agree with Madelaina, I didn’t want this amazing poem to end, it’s wonderful! HF, everything you write is amazing and beautiful!! We want more of you!!
I love this poem! I’d pay for a copy to hang on my wall!:] Sooo beautiful!!!!!
That was amazing! It was very thought-provoking.
Thank everyone! lol. y’all are champion righers. and Rochila– you can always print it out and frame it or whatever you want… =0)
~HF
Beautiful.
Thats the only word I can think of to describe your work, HorseFeathers.:)
Would you mind if I put it on my blog? I’ll give you the credit. Even if I didn’t people would know it wasn’t me who wrote it, it’s simply to good! I could never hope to write a poem so well!
♞ I’maCowgirl
Thanks I’maCowgirl… yes you may put it on your blog if you mention my blogger name =0) Most of my poems are free-verse if you havn’t noticed already — i write from the heart and the soul.
~HF
That was beautiful, as always Horsefeathers! :) I wish I could write poetry as good as you can…
I love it!Horsefeathers please write more poems!LD
Cool, HorseFeathers, I like to write free-verse, too. I doesn’t turn out half so well as yours.
Its amazing! No exaggeration. It sort of reminds me of the poem by Shel Silverstein, The Road Less Traveled By. Not exactly in context, but…
Thanks HorseFeathers!
What is your blogger name? And what’s your blog’s name?
THanks again everyone! Imacowgirl– oh i don’t have a real blogger name on a diff site yet. You can just refer to the author as your friend HorseFeathers (copyright all rights reserved) LOL.
~HF
Have you ever considered becoming an author? Or a poet at least?
thats touching poetry keep up the poetry young poet! flapjack:i like that poem,and i love to ride horsies! =^_^=
You are a great poet and author! That poem is simply beautiful. Where do you get ideas to write your wonderful poems and stories?
Michelle– yes i love writing but if its God’s will i want to be an Equestion Vet when i am older. Maybe a part time author, illustrator, or poet.
Fatima– the ideas come from my heart, my friends, my family, horses ive known and will know, and my love for God’s wonderful creatures.. the horses
~HF
Wow that’s really really good!
This poem is my favorite poem ever!I makes my spirit soar!Horsefeathers,I love it that you want to do what is God’s plan for you!I admire your faith!:]