Comments on: Wild Ash

By: grace

grace — Sun, 28 Mar 2010 20:19:32 +0000

Hi Julie,I loved your story.I can’t beleave you can write so good. WOW!! that’s all Ican say.I love horses, so think your story is so so so SO good! Bye bye Ju Ju.

By: Mrs. Vasko

Mrs. Vasko — Sun, 28 Mar 2010 20:10:46 +0000

Julie! What a great story, and more importantly, what a wonderful gift you have to be able to WRITE! Keep using this gift that the Lord has given you. We are very proud of you.

By: Julie

Julie — Thu, 18 Mar 2010 00:12:43 +0000

I made up the names. They’re from the language of the fantasy novel I’m writing. I like to picture the village as being in my fantasy land, in a different time then what I’m writing.
I would like to write from the point of view of the stallion, or Starry Path. I’ve never read a story from the point of view of a blind horse, & I think it would be fun & challenging to write.

By: Rochlia

Rochlia — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 20:13:32 +0000

Did you create the names yourself, or are they native american? Great storyline and style, I loved it! The stallion was my favorite character, you should write a story about what happened to him! :]

By: Madelaina

Madelaina — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 07:22:33 +0000

This is one of THE best stories I have ever read. All through it I kept thinking “This isn’t a novel?”. I’m in love with how you wrote it. Amazing job, Julie! Never stop, because you’ve got real talent :)

By: Zanzibar the Great

Zanzibar the Great — Wed, 17 Mar 2010 01:11:29 +0000

Good job, Julie, your a very talented writer. I bet you could go places if you put your heart to it, just like every girl here! I loved how the story flowed and the relationship between human and horse.

By: Julie

Julie — Tue, 16 Mar 2010 22:50:02 +0000

Thanks, you guys! I was so excited when I saw my story, I jumped around and did a happy dance–which is a cross between a polka and a line dance.
I would love to write a sequel, Huskyhorsegirl. Visiting Coven, Leri, and a herd of wild horses that must be hiding in the woods would be wonderful. :)
The next time there’s a contest. I’ll enter in a heartbeat!

By: huskyhorsegirl

huskyhorsegirl — Mon, 15 Mar 2010 23:44:44 +0000

WHOA!!! That was amazing, especially the part how she spoke to the stallion! I almost think that if you made it a little bit longer, it would make a great book, lol!

By: Gypsy Vanner

Gypsy Vanner — Mon, 15 Mar 2010 22:46:43 +0000

OH MY GOODNESS WOW!!! That is absolutely incredible Julie! Wow, I’ll always remember how she spoke to that stallion! That was so awesome! I can’t stop raving, that was amazing!

By: mustang23

mustang23 — Mon, 15 Mar 2010 20:42:17 +0000

WOW!! That was so good! the story that Ista told was very good, but the ending was sublime!! I really really liked this story, and I’m speechless now! It was so… wow. You are so talented!! Great job!