Comments on: Wild

By: Madelaina

Madelaina — Sat, 04 Jul 2009 03:57:22 +0000

This poem is extraordinary! I’m constantly amazed at how you can so amazingly write about topics usually unexplored by someone your age. In this case, you’ve captured the noble spirits of wild horses perfectly. I can see their beauty, their strengths, their persistence. You’ll no doubt be a famous poet someday. It’s an absolute privilege to read your work.

By: Michelle

Michelle — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 21:16:00 +0000

Awesome poem :] You write really well

By: Rochlia

Rochlia — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 20:44:57 +0000

Wow!I love your poem Peanut!It reminds me of a saying on a phantom stallion book: How can you capture a free spirit? Beautiful!!!

By: Fatima

Fatima — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 19:25:52 +0000

Wow! That’s a great poem. You are such a great writer. My story for the contest is about a wild horse also.

By: mustang23

mustang23 — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 18:45:47 +0000

I saw the horses rearing in my mind. I saw the ropes flying through the air. I saw the mustangs wheeling in the pens. Wow. All this from such a young rider.

By: WesternMare

WesternMare — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 17:31:55 +0000

Speachless! Just speachless! Awesome job!! You beautifuly discribed the freedom that wild horses have. Great poem!

By: Blaze'ncowgirl

Blaze'ncowgirl — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 16:37:19 +0000

Peanut you are such an awesome writer! Beautiful poem! =)

By: Pony Princess

Pony Princess — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 13:42:09 +0000

Wow, Peanut! I love this. I can see the whole thing as I read it, every detail. Great job, you are an amazing writer.

By: HorseFeathers

HorseFeathers — Fri, 03 Jul 2009 12:53:49 +0000

Champion Peanut! Beautiful just beautiful. Your poem poetically describes the freedom that the wild horses yearn for that they are willing to die for it. Sort of reminds of of the horse animation movie “Spirit”
~HF